2.Summary
This week, a gunman in Aurora shot dead 12 and wounde 58 people. It's a tragedy for huamn beings. This show is dived into three parts. First of all,the mayor of Aurora give his opinions regard to this cool- blood ,vilolent criminal. He pointed out it just was a random incident, and the killer who is an ordinary man just did wrong seriouly this time. Second, it's give us some investigations, such as how to cope with tragedy for colorado, and who is next Holmes? Last. it's a big question that need to search for. They are from different fields, and they discussed whether the goveronment should control the gun strictly.Meanwhile, some examples and statement are came up with. Is the gun really control the answer？
3.opinion
First, I am so sad and angry when i heard this news, you know, just see a movie, tweleve people was shot to dead causeless. I hate the gunman who has a good education, why are you so cruel and crazy? Absolutely, we don't need concern this crimianl too much, after all ,it just a individual incident. But, there are some questions for us to care, especially the laws to control guns. Although it's hard to adjust or change, I still suggest the goveronmet should take effective action and decrease the incidence, and no innocent people die in the future.
Very nice! This definitely was a terrible thing to happen. I am going to watch your link!
ReplyDeleteI liked your response a lot; there are some grammar issues to look at, but it is clear and understandable. Think about how to make your writing more academic--a little more formal than how you would speak.
I will correct it.
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